AllybertToth's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Dot Dot Square]

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That wasn't really very good, it was like watching someone doing an animation of a YouTube comment so it wasn't a parody so much as the exact same thing as the original but like, much worse. It wasn't really very funny or original and I couldn't laugh about it as much as the original, because that was of a bad review, this wasn't even of reviews, just of a few words from them, that are used all the time anyway. It's not really very funny to hear something like "lol!" or "W-T-EFF" read across the screen, cause' they're not funny things to say, they're just words (kind of) whereas "the athore coments al totol lies!" is hilarious to hear, like, wtf does that even mean?
The typography wasn't that good, it was kind of, uneven, too much to the left of right of another word or not spaced correctly, too close to a word or too far away and the different effects like, how the words appear on the screen were boring, very generic. No offence to you personally but, you don't really have the right voice for this kind of "epic" theme or at least the voice acting ability. And the music wasn't that fitting either. I think you tried too hard on this, to copy what someone else has done. The difference between yours and RicePirate's? You forced this A LOT. To him an idea came naturally and speaking of ideas, you should really think of your own.

P.S the only reson im giving this a 3 is beacuase you did a good attempt at emulating the original, which was brilliant. but thats it!

Sketchy responds:

Yeah, as I had stated a few reviews ago, is replicating the original is so much harder than using your own style... but thanks for the review, this will be noted :)

[Do your balls hang low]

Ahaha!

I actually found that hilarious, well done on not trying too hard man :D

koit responds:

Oh I never try too hard. In fact, I like to take the easy option always. :)

[Animation Transformation]

It was good...

But when he turned into different art styles, some of them were just like the original characters in costumes as opposed to your character in that style. Especially the art style of The Brothers Chaps and Bryan Lee O'Malley (I'm a big fan of both their work), it just looked like Homestar and Scott Pilgrim in costumes. Also, I didn't like how long he stayed as each one, he was Scott pilgrim for less than a second and a powerpuff girl for ages. Apart from that, yeah, twas' awesome. The music was good, the animation was smooth and the art was very nice, well done.

Also. Do a Minecraft one and a DC comics one :)

VieRickend responds:

Some of this was made a year ago, when I wasn't too imaginative with my artwork. So, yeah, I agree that some of the characters do look like their just wearing a costume. But, since then, my skills have drastically changed, so I'll be able to do more originally designed characters while pertaining other artist's formulas. That's what the extended version is for.

[Programmed to Love]

Well...

That was pretty boring and very unoriginal I think this plot has been done millions of times. But I guess you did it well.

Liked: The robot sounded empty which added to the sadness of the whole story. Good lip syncing.
Disliked: The characters were pretty lazily designed. The animation made the characters seem lifeless and weakened the depth of the whole animation. Dr. Tao, I think his name was, had pretty weak voice-acting, like not enough emotion.

To Improve: Try and act when recording voices, it won't be seen, but it will help you inject feeling into characters.

PostTimeskipSam responds:

Originally, this was written as a comedy, but several factors such as voice-acting and timely turned it into more of a drama. I knew a serious role would be difficult to voice, but it's best to keep practicing. So I appreciate the advice.

As for the animations, I purposeful made the robot animations nonexistent because I wanted her to continuously focus onto the TV and not respond to Andrick. For Dr. Andrick, I understand what you are saying about the animations. He wasn't animated to his emotions. When he was made, he didn't animate like he was mad. Also Dr. Tao is just a scientist was recieved the emails. Dr. Andrick is the actual main character.

I appreciate your review. Thanks. :D

[Halo Reach - Clay Trailer]

Above average...

But not my favourite...
Great animation but the clay figures could have been better and i got bored...

mattuiop responds:

it did get boring when i animated this!
and it was rushed on the characters!
thanks anyways

[what is this i dont even]

Nice

I have no damn idea what the hell that was ment to be, but that frickin music was amazing.
Thank you, just thank you.
Overall: Can't really be catagorized, not smart, no plot, BRILLIANT! (I can relate).

Short-Factor responds:

Um yeah sure