AllybertToth's game Reviews on Newgrounds

[Lil' Jose's Build-a-Bot]

Haha, cool.

It's simple and nice. Good time-waster.

Liked: The character, he was cute and well designed. The whole art style was consistent. I very much enjoyed finding the right parts, a great sense of achievement when I did.
Disliked: I can see this becoming boring after a while, and so does the music.

To Improve (If you make a sequel): Good game! Try to make the stages a bit harder and make it so only parts of a certain group of unrelated, random robots appear. Maybe a skin chooser (possibly even playing as robots you unlock).

DieterTheuns responds:

We'll try making more changes as you progress in future projects. Thanks for the helpful review : )

[Pico's Musical experience]

Sorry, but...

I didn't particularly enjoy playing it and if i'm being honest, it looked terrible.
The gameplay was unoriginal, it was a rhythm game but bad. When I pressed an arrow key I would have liked something more to happen, maybe a quick flash on the screen or the arrow picture disintegrates or something. I would have also like the music to link in with the actual song, maybe an arrow key every note or every 2 or 3.

Liked: The music, twas' awesome! The 8-bit theme.

Disliked: The game was missing some gameplay every game needs: Pause, volume, an actual menu to go in to, I felt like I was an over viewer of a game I was actually playing-I would have like to be able to refer back to the main menu after every level. Also I went into the game way to fast, it was like I walked to the Newgrounds office (the door had a shadow on it, that looked bad) and I was straight in there, no transition, no "Start level" or "Go!" Button.

Improvements: Try to not make little errors. A lot of little errors make a big problem.

-Allybert

EventHorizon responds:

ok, thanks for the criticism and for the suggestions, the next time I will try to improve